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Thursday, September 5, 2019

my nanny's and pop home please like it

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  1. i have made a mistake with the writing underneath the heading ok

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  3. Hey Cameron this is a really cool story I like how you added paragraphs but maybe next time when you are listing things use comma's between each word etc : Banana,Apple,Orange and blue berry's but apart from that good job.

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